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I display in many ways
my love of art to the words I say
painting a pictures for you to see
to find my inner harmony
creative with colors true
trying to touch you
my love of art to the words I say
painting a pictures for you to see
to find my inner harmony
creative with colors true
trying to touch you
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commented on Just a grape on the vineExtremely clever very good write enjoyed it! keep up the great work. rate:
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commented on a dreamy debut...I let my mind wonder as I read your words
all I could see is a beautiful verse
I didn't want it to end at my fingertips
I want to touch it with my lips
to walk in the tall grass and tip some time
to see the truth about nature rhythm.
all I could see is a beautiful verse
I didn't want it to end at my fingertips
I want to touch it with my lips
to walk in the tall grass and tip some time
to see the truth about nature rhythm.
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replied on a dreamy debut...Goodness what an absolutely beautiful comment... I'm honoured! Thank you so much.
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commented on i love your brewA gorgeous love poem. Very much enjoyed the extended metaphor of coffee. rate:
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Jeralyn Morgan says about contest Tale of the Time Traveler. (Poem is the prompt): Thank you all for entering poems and putting up with cranky contest rules. I will begin reading entries in the coming days but it may take up to a month to comment on the poems. There are only 11 entries, so everyone will be a finalist. For me, composing an intelligent comment is sometimes harder than writing a poem, seriously lol. comment 2 days ago
commented on Shakespeare's first computerInteresting write which I think I'd understand a lot better if there was a bit more punctuation
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The contest Tale of the Time Traveler. (Poem is the prompt) - Jeralyn Morgan has been judged! Thank you all very much for your inspiring entries!! As per usual, judging was not easy. Every write was creative and thought provoking, however,, I would've liked to have seen more punctuation in most of the entries, which makes for smoother reading, and less capitalization where needed. Would have given gold to the top two entries if it were possible. Reason took me back through time to Eden, then fast forwarded all the way to John the Revelator, who traveled in time through his remarkable prophetic visions. Blue Dust Trail built up some great suspense, and I would love to see the story continue. Lost was very nicely put together and a trip I'd never want to take! On a last note,, there've been so many contests where I was sure my entry would score, but it didn't! So don't give up, keep writing!. See the finalist list 4 hours ago
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commented on Sticky notes Welcome to All Poetry!
I love the use of colors here for your sticky notes. Very easy to read with a great rhyming scheme. You did well here.
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I love the use of colors here for your sticky notes. Very easy to read with a great rhyming scheme. You did well here.
Jan Site Greeter
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commented on Monopoly of the heartthis is a lovely outstanding monopolistic poem keep playing
Inspired me
Inspired me
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commented on Sticky notesWelcome to AllPoetry
A clever use of colour as the inspiration for your poem here which works very well. Imagery helps to build up your word picture in a strong light for your reader to both experience and enjoy. Well done and thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. Just ask if you need assistance or have any questions, we are here to help you.
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A clever use of colour as the inspiration for your poem here which works very well. Imagery helps to build up your word picture in a strong light for your reader to both experience and enjoy. Well done and thank you for taking the time to enter the contest. Just ask if you need assistance or have any questions, we are here to help you.
Katie
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commented on Sticky notesWelcome to All Poetry,
This was a clever piece you have penned and shared with us.As the imagery of the sticky notes full of unfinished thoughts were wonderfully expressed. I hope they can be finished one day.Thank you for your entry in this month's new members contest.I hope you are enjoying your time here at All Poetry.If you need help or have any questions,feel free to reach out.I'll be happy to help you.
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Nikki Keep writing rate:
This was a clever piece you have penned and shared with us.As the imagery of the sticky notes full of unfinished thoughts were wonderfully expressed. I hope they can be finished one day.Thank you for your entry in this month's new members contest.I hope you are enjoying your time here at All Poetry.If you need help or have any questions,feel free to reach out.I'll be happy to help you.
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commented on when will we write the news?I wholeheartedly agree with this expression. The feel is real and harmony has eluded our way of living and they're making wealth off of this suffering of ours. This is what we wanted after all...i enjoyed this.
Nicely penned.
Nicely penned.
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commented on Challengesthe cycles of life are in the ground from climate change to the meteors bouncing around.
the wisdom within the sea
respect the earth and you and me
Inspired.
the wisdom within the sea
respect the earth and you and me
Inspired.
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commented on i love your brewWhat a beautiful expression of love for another. Gorgeous.
Nicely penned
Nicely penned
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commented on [ L ]the hope for love is in our hearts
between two its that connect its hard to part
between two its that connect its hard to part
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commented on What Do You Want to Be When You Grow Up?with the taste of pink can't you see a princess the meat to be
unicorns vibrating in time
with the batteries all the time
the witch stayed with a blast
Eveready is here to last Nicely written
unicorns vibrating in time
with the batteries all the time
the witch stayed with a blast
Eveready is here to last Nicely written
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commented on Space a vesselI loved reading this!
did the thought run from your lips
color with every line
they are your word
fruit from a vine Liked it
did the thought run from your lips
color with every line
they are your word
fruit from a vine Liked it
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commented on Forever KissesCravings
Do you hear the song from with in?
as he touches your perfect skin
with the moonlight on your back
tender is the heart
when love attracts
the smell of lavender is in the air
two souls collide
its not fair
you surrender all your desire
as the passions burning fire
he takes what he needs
leaving you hungry
with a need
Craving him even more
addicted to love
when he walks out the door.
by scottleebaker
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Do you hear the song from with in?
as he touches your perfect skin
with the moonlight on your back
tender is the heart
when love attracts
the smell of lavender is in the air
two souls collide
its not fair
you surrender all your desire
as the passions burning fire
he takes what he needs
leaving you hungry
with a need
Craving him even more
addicted to love
when he walks out the door.
by scottleebaker
Lovely
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commented on contest Brevity/Rhyme/Free Verse to pic.biblical Nutrition
Bread and water
is at my table
were is the meat
from Cain and able
god don't tell me
I was a waste of time
humble me
let me
drink your wine
from this prayer
I ask today
even the birds that sung
have moved away
with the knowledge
you have a plan
I feel like a turkey
and not a man
a rush of emotions
that I can not express
were is my shirt ?
I'm bare !
my chest !
make this a day to say
you were the one
who made me stay.
Please help !
me fine the time
comfort me with your
meal sometime!
By Scottleebaker
Bread and water
is at my table
were is the meat
from Cain and able
god don't tell me
I was a waste of time
humble me
let me
drink your wine
from this prayer
I ask today
even the birds that sung
have moved away
with the knowledge
you have a plan
I feel like a turkey
and not a man
a rush of emotions
that I can not express
were is my shirt ?
I'm bare !
my chest !
make this a day to say
you were the one
who made me stay.
Please help !
me fine the time
comfort me with your
meal sometime!
By Scottleebaker
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I would but it shows it was closed 9 days ago
Sorry...a wee bit too late. Try this new one should you wish.https://allpoetry.com/contest/2799042-The-Rabbis-Bad-News---Brevity
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added holy pockets' - Scottleebaker to your contest The Rabbi's Bad News - BrevityTaxes may chap your hide / but you can't scream and you can't hide / everything is on the
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Definitely a read that shows depth here. 🤔comment 8 days ago
commented on holy pockets'I've removed this contest because it appears to have offended a Jewish poet here at AP. I really don't want to expand on that any further. My apologies to those who entered. rate:
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commented on holy pockets'Hahaha. I guess the Rabbi told THEM. Haha.
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commented on watch your ******* languageI took out my eyes and tryed to curse
but I found a witches thrust
cursing out the ones you love
the tongue was not from hell
or heaven above Great
but I found a witches thrust
cursing out the ones you love
the tongue was not from hell
or heaven above Great
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replied on watch your ******* languageha, nice, s....cow witches using the eye of newt and the tongue of bull.....
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commented on Shakespeare's first computerI loved the creativity of this poem! It was super interesting to think about it! Great job!
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commented on See the Light!leisure in the hymns as they wrap
round you forget him when he sends you to the ground. Enjoyable
round you forget him when he sends you to the ground. Enjoyable
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commented on holy pockets'An interesting concept,which I'm still trying to clarify.Well penned rate:
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commented on [ biblical Nutrition ]This is so unique, love the way you married the words together
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commented on Silent loveMy your cup run full and they find themselves back to you
Lovely
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commented on Political Rantthe poetry of this crime
happens with reason and rhyme
lying to everyone then rising with the morning sun with feathers they tickle you pink with the sounds of foul
that really stink! Great!
happens with reason and rhyme
lying to everyone then rising with the morning sun with feathers they tickle you pink with the sounds of foul
that really stink! Great!
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commented on Seasonswhen I was young I had soul
but with age away it goes
its seasoned now from the grind
salt and peppers with age is Devine Thank ya
but with age away it goes
its seasoned now from the grind
salt and peppers with age is Devine Thank ya
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commented on Give Them A Thoughta trial by words is heaven spent
to hear a song from angles lips
silence is the deepest sound
can you hear their hearts under ground Nicely penned
to hear a song from angles lips
silence is the deepest sound
can you hear their hearts under ground Nicely penned
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commented on small thingsNice creative imaginative write. Had a Lord of the Rings feel to it.
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commented on small thingsThis was a pleasure to read, I hope you continue to write more
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commented on funny boyhide a seek in the words
we enjoy every noun, space, and verb
the light of the story
the picture that dwells openly
you shared his hell
Great
we enjoy every noun, space, and verb
the light of the story
the picture that dwells openly
you shared his hell
Great
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commented on the cowgirlThis is a powerful composition with a message. The narrative unfolds the imagery perfectly as it progresses. The cowgirl exudes confidence in the last two lines. Great. rate:
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commented on Feet keep moving aroundI love the flow and the tempo
please keep it upright some more never give it up Keep on it
please keep it upright some more never give it up Keep on it
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commented on Feet keep moving aroundnot sure about the point thing . but thank you
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commented on remember the callthis is great, an elegantly written tribute to our soldiers. nice job👏🏼 rate:
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commented on Enchanted NightsI love the theme and your treatment of it. I find the feeling of the verse to be "authentic" versus "Hollywood". I offer two suggestions: 1- The word is "Altar" not "Alter". Suggestion #2 In line 20 the word "liquid" seems a bit vague; consider alternatives like "libation" or "potion", something more specific to your theme. Well written, good rhythm, never stop writing.
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commented on I am yoursthe word that brings such a sound will raise you up and brings you down
love that there is on a rise
wipe your tears and dry your eyes
Enjoyed it
love that there is on a rise
wipe your tears and dry your eyes
Enjoyed it
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replied on Music Of The LonelyAww...thank you so much! I'm extra pleased that you liked it!
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commented on A feathered exploitkind of dark
but a good write
I bid you a grand good night
keep writing and let your words find flight Great.
but a good write
I bid you a grand good night
keep writing and let your words find flight Great.
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commented on a walk in the parkThat was a really good poem man. Not much more to say I guess, it was a good story, and it was descriptively excellent. Well done. rate:
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